Cheers mate for the honest feedback as it all helps me improve my development skills.
To be honest you should have died in the house, there was 2 scares you missed so maybe that didn't trigger the death scene. The camera glitch wasn't a glitch that was intentional as the msg says you need to go down and fix it, was trying to lead the player down stairs.
All up I think I had about 8 weeks to make it by myself.(TY asset store) lol.